A Modern Talking Bird
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A modern talking bird
Is Bri Edwards,
How much he talks! And is too hot! !
But these traits will help him to write
Some big books
With his wife,
I am sure
About everybody will wonder
For these will be so super
In words, similes, imageries, metaphors
In meaning, rhyming and verses
And I will be one of these buyers.
Copyright © Muzahidul Reza │2 April,2018
You call these heroic couplets, but they are nothing of the kind! Why do you do this? And why does this site permit this? ? ?
And these modern open ones any time may be turned into iambic meter, thanks
MODERN: A modern talking bird Is Bri Edwards, How much he talks! And is too hot! ! But these traits will help him to write Some big books With his wife,
OLD: Of these the false Achitophel was first: A name to all succeeding ages cursed; For close designs and wicked counsels fit; Sagacious, bold, and turbulent of wit; Restless, unfixed in principles and place; In power unpleased, impatient of disgrace.
These two heroic couplets are in modern open / free style and not in old iambic meter
(continued) .. but i'm a bit confused? i came here today following the link you sent, thinking i'd find something else, a stanza i thought you were going to write to add to this poem. maybe i'm just getting TOO OLD to remember/follow some 'things'? ? ....oh! no, it was a stanza you might write to add to one of MY POEMS! ! ha ha. i still remember how to use a spoon! bri ;)
upon reading, on 4-5-18, your message to me, dated 4-2, i have discovered this poem never went to MyPoemList; i shall have to correct that lack of 'being done'! ! (continued) ..
i DO like it. and 'how could i not like it? ? ? ? '; it is about ME! ! ! a Tribute to the beautiful brute, bri! ! yay! ! ! ME! ! I'M sure i did write you a responsive message telling you some of my observations and suggesting that, yes, you 'should' submit it to PH. i'm glad you did. to MyPoemList. bri :) (continued) ...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How much he talks! And is too hot! ! But these traits will help him to write Some big books With his wife, .......... outstanding, thanks for sharing