Hi Time Poem by Dorukhan Baris Oguzcan

Hi Time



I began writing as I was ill
Then the dark sun came out to push my will
I abandoned bad thoughts, the sickness I do fought
Now ı am back, it is raining unusually
How I wished my thoughts were those for goodness

I came down with relentless empathy
Hooked on its greatness, such a tragedy
Needlessly I once released from my obsession and granted solitude
The stories of those marked seep in to my dreams
I served for this post restlessly, I demand now
Heal me

Sunday, July 1, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: dream time,empathy,blind love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My first poem opened doors to others. A myriad of self Inversion.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Timber Koleden 25 April 2025

Poetry is a powerful remedy to internal despair. Never stop writing.

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Ralph The Elf 02 July 2012

you are already well

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Godfrey Morris 01 July 2012

Yes indeed you'll find your healing. Do continue to write.

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