Hidden Crescent Moon Smiles Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Hidden Crescent Moon Smiles

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In lap of clouds in clear autumn sky,
During this festive season of Earth,
Main highway of city is decorated,
Effect of prism is witnessed at night.

Such a dark night is in tranquillity,
In deep clear sky cloud is invisible,
Sometimes crescent moon hides and sees,
Moon smiles in a half circle in love.

Green, violet, rosy and pink coloured,
Many lights twinkle as stars in middle,
This seems from heaven angels have come,
To see them moon opens veil and closes.

Half of Earth is in the dark and hope,
Rest half is decorated in light rays,
Growing up in effective attitudes again,
Crescent moon gives them all calmness.

This decorated autumn night in nice fair,
Continuously this whispers about life,
Beauty revives mind to make up in light,
Fair is seen today in autumn night of joy.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,03 October 2017. All rights reserved.

Hidden Crescent Moon Smiles
Tuesday, October 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,festival,moon,night,perception
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,30 September 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dogma Daniman 20 March 2019

Smile of crescent moon has deeper love for mankind. A nice imagery you have interestingly captured drear sir.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Crescent moon's smile is truly very beautiful. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Rajnish Manga 03 October 2017

This is a moonlit night spreading the spirit of celebration and festivity. You have beautifully portrayed the scene from earth to the sky in the autumnal backdrop reflecting a riot of captivating colours. Thanks for sharing. Fair is seen today in autumn night of joy.

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Mahakul. Thank you very much.

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Rini Shibu 03 October 2017

At this festive season moon, stars and heaven too rejoicing, a night filled with joy.. Lovely

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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