Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Hills On Sands Comments

Rating: 5.0

Quite a child
she makes me one
mind windward wild
flies gazelle run!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Piyush Dey 29 October 2014

A delightful read, remembering the childhood days that seem to linger in our dreams.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 October 2014

Make hills on sand, very wonderful expression with child's memory and play. Nice work.

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Valsa George 15 October 2014

When we roam along sea strands, we often become children again, making sand castles and rolling in the waves! There is a child in every man! Enjoyed!

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Tribhawan Kaul 15 October 2014

Quite and imagery produced while standing at a sea shore....lovely :)

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 October 2014

Love has got that wonderful spell to make feel the way it likes........very nicely composed

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