Hills On Sands Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

Hills On Sands

Rating: 5.0


Quite a child
she makes me one
mind windward wild
flies gazelle run!

On the shore
she's something more
than picking pearl

opens door
once more
she's a little girl!

She picks seashells
of sea she smells
she looks alien

free she sails
in her spell
i'm child again!

On the sea
wild carefree
she paints me joy

make hills on sands
small grow my hands
i'm again a boy!

Tuesday, October 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Piyush Dey 29 October 2014

A delightful read, remembering the childhood days that seem to linger in our dreams.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 October 2014

Make hills on sand, very wonderful expression with child's memory and play. Nice work.

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Valsa George 15 October 2014

When we roam along sea strands, we often become children again, making sand castles and rolling in the waves! There is a child in every man! Enjoyed!

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Tribhawan Kaul 15 October 2014

Quite and imagery produced while standing at a sea shore....lovely :)

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 October 2014

Love has got that wonderful spell to make feel the way it likes........very nicely composed

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