His Love Poem by indira babbellapati

His Love

Rating: 5.0


his love,
beautiful twin roses
decorating her bosom
from deep red
to pink to blue
to purple...
the color changed
till it's become
her skin that
exuded the perfume
of his love

her blood is
more intoxicating
than the best of perfumes
ever since

25sep2009
22.50hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i hope the twin roses are what i think them to be. if so.. dang.. wonderful piece.

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Indira Babbellapati 27 September 2009

Seduction, incarnate....well described. From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) Date Time: 9/26/2009 3: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

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Dr Kamran Haider 29 September 2009

You made me smile... :) Though I was feeling quite low before reading this piece... Lovely...

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Saadat Tahir 01 October 2009

hey prof just one 10 fer this master piece....tch cth what a paucity of taste.... fantastic....full of earthy life and Karishma...loveed it cheers and hey can just chip in ten

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Rachel Butler 09 October 2009

her skin that exuded the perfume of his love Rachel Ann Butler

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Rachel Butler 09 October 2009

her skin that exuded the perfume of his love Rachel Ann Butler

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 06 October 2009

Seduction is weak term to connote gamut of LOVE. I don’t know. Dear poets please help me what love is. Nice ten dr.sakti Cordially invite to my page. ds

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 October 2009

Wow, what beautiful poetry.. Indira 10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 02 October 2009

a subtle expression only a few can handle. shan

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indira babbellapati

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