His love towards her
just like nibbling an unripe mangoe
watering mouths of the audience
but making his teeth benumb.
You say little to say much. Very unique imagery. Kind regards, Sandra
It's amazing how short as this piece is, the words make me very aware of my mouth, almost a puckering. I find this a unique sensation.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow, the love seen like 'nibbling an unripe mangoe' what a wonderful delicious metaphor! I have never read such a sweet simile for one's love to someone. Bravo!