Kolitha Lelwala


His Love To Her - Poem by Kolitha Lelwala

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His love towards her
just like nibbling an unripe mangoe
watering mouths of the audience
but making his teeth benumb.


Comments about His Love To Her by Kolitha Lelwala

  • (1/12/2009 5:46:00 AM)


    Wow, the love seen like 'nibbling an unripe mangoe' what a wonderful delicious metaphor! I have never read such a sweet simile for one's love to someone. Bravo! (Report) Reply

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  • (1/1/2009 4:14:00 PM)


    You say little to say much. Very unique imagery.

    Kind regards,

    Sandra
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  • (1/1/2009 12:14:00 AM)


    true but if it is for the audience, , ,10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2008 8:02:00 AM)


    It's amazing how short as this piece is, the words make me very aware of my mouth, almost a puckering. I find this a unique sensation. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 24, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 24, 2008


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