His Love To Her Poem by Kolitha Lelwala

His Love To Her

Rating: 5.0


His love towards her
just like nibbling an unripe mangoe
watering mouths of the audience
but making his teeth benumb.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 12 January 2009

Wow, the love seen like 'nibbling an unripe mangoe' what a wonderful delicious metaphor! I have never read such a sweet simile for one's love to someone. Bravo!

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Sandra Fowler 01 January 2009

You say little to say much. Very unique imagery. Kind regards, Sandra

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 January 2009

true but if it is for the audience, , ,10

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ppp sss 31 December 2008

It's amazing how short as this piece is, the words make me very aware of my mouth, almost a puckering. I find this a unique sensation.

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