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Final Count Down

Rating: 5.0
It’s so heavy
Well,
Hard to stand up
With this greed, anger, hatred.
It’s so stinking…
Well,
It’s very hard to breathe…
In this fetid air…
Smells of revulsion,
Aroma of lust.
Thirst of contentment …
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Sandra Fowler 01 January 2009
You felt this one very deeply. The world is in chaos. But one can still have inner peace. Each day is a gift and well worth living. I think of what Tagore said, 'The butterfly counts not months but moments and has time enough'. Take care. Warm wishes for a hopeful 2009, Sandra
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Sadiqullah Khan 01 January 2009
the closer we get to the end the faster the countdown, , , well written 10
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Ranjith Wijekoon 23 December 2008
Kolitha, In one word - Fantastic Theruwan Sarana
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Mimi Fakhira 22 December 2008
I felt like the final countdown has already started when I read this. A pure talent with a philosophy. Great work!
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