Thursday, October 30, 2014

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Rating: 5.0

The doctor probed my eyes
stethoed to feel my lung
had my mouth wide prised
got rolled out my tongue!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Lorraine Colon 31 October 2014

Only the poet understands that the night was meant for weaving thoughts and feelings into poems. You expressed it so well.

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

Beautiful write on poem itself. Quite humorous one. Very true said, poor doctor dont know what's the problem. Poor doctor how he would ever know best time for poeming is the night when crystal dreams in moon glow pour out from heart with might! Loved reading it. Beautiful presentation.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 31 October 2014

Great tribute to poetry by this great composition for the poetry..........amazing piece......Pradipji

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Saheb Mohapatra 30 October 2014

VERY FUNNY ONE...............AT LAST STANZA IT CLEARLY SHOWS YOUR LOVE FOR POETRY............GREAT IMAGINATION...when crystal dream in moon's glow.............excellent.......thanks

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