Home Waters Comments

i like it, i miss home. from portsmouth and living in LA 4 now....mmm

Now this is something else! What a wonderful way you have with the double rhyming thing, Very clever indeed. I really did enjoy this one immensely Sincerely Ernestine

like ulysses? so nice :)

This is nice, Peter. I like the rhymes within each line...and the message. I'm ready to get on a ship and sail away. This poem is compelling, along with the pull of the sea. Raynette

I like your poem but you obviously don't suffer from sea sickness.