Whether it be the angle
Or the chill in the five am
I realized I've truly fallen for you
Looking down at you
Working on your Jeep
Smiling upwards
I know there's no going backwards
My heart is all in
Patient
Living life
Maybe you will be a part
Of the long term
Maybe you were short term
To teach me to love again
Today I see no comments yet below. BUT yesterday I left a lot of them and apparently my PH friend James M. THOUGHT I, bri, am/was the author.
(cont.) Synonyms of 'hook line and sinker': completely, totally, entirely, thoroughly ...A person could 'fall in love completely' OR, very different, usually, one could be deceived, tricked completely.
(continued) For example, not ALL will know the meaning of 'hook line and sinker' (it could be related to fishing, you know? !) (cont....again)
Leigh, I got your message and shall look forward to seeing that 'changes' have been made, which have not appeared yet. And you may change the title, you say. : )
Leigh, I plan to put this poem into my July 2023 'Showcase' of poems I've enjoyed (usually recently) on PH. Thanks! bri : )
(cont.) If we could review how our comments show up on a poem's page, we commenters could readily act to make corrections OR apologies. : ))))
I 'HATE' the 'WAIT', between sending a comment and its appearance on a poem's page (a wait I suppose to give PH's supposed censoring system to do its 'work'.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
(cont.) Why I say that is timeconsuming to explain so I won't. Ha ha. I may have misinterpreted something he said in a comment I DON'T SEE ON poem's page. : )