Hooked Poem by Leigh Parham

Hooked

Rating: 5.0


Whether it be the angle

Or the chill in the five am

I realized I've truly fallen for you

Looking down at you

Working on your Jeep

Smiling upwards

I know there's no going backwards

My heart is all in

Patient

Living life

Maybe you will be a part

Of the long term

Maybe you were short term

To teach me to love again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 27 June 2023

(cont.) Why I say that is timeconsuming to explain so I won't. Ha ha. I may have misinterpreted something he said in a comment I DON'T SEE ON poem's page. : )

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Bri Edwards 27 June 2023

Today I see no comments yet below. BUT yesterday I left a lot of them and apparently my PH friend James M. THOUGHT I, bri, am/was the author.

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James McLain 26 June 2023

Great poem Bri, I like the way you think.

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

(cont.) Synonyms of 'hook line and sinker': completely, totally, entirely, thoroughly ...A person could 'fall in love completely' OR, very different, usually, one could be deceived, tricked completely.

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

(continued) For example, not ALL will know the meaning of 'hook line and sinker' (it could be related to fishing, you know? !) (cont....again)

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

Leigh, I got your message and shall look forward to seeing that 'changes' have been made, which have not appeared yet. And you may change the title, you say. : )

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Bri Edwards 27 June 2023

It may be several days before showcase in online. ;)

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Bri Edwards 27 June 2023

Leigh, I plan to put this poem into my July 2023 'Showcase' of poems I've enjoyed (usually recently) on PH. Thanks! bri : )

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Bri Edwards 27 June 2023

(cont.) If we could review how our comments show up on a poem's page, we commenters could readily act to make corrections OR apologies. : ))))

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Bri Edwards 27 June 2023

I 'HATE' the 'WAIT', between sending a comment and its appearance on a poem's page (a wait I suppose to give PH's supposed censoring system to do its 'work'.

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