Hooked Poem by Joscephine Gomez

Hooked



A smile, a look
connectedness felt.
Booked.

We enjoyed the same music,
ordered the same cake
our thoughts merged
our beings shook.
Hooked.

Friday, April 27, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: music
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 14 June 2007

From looked to hooked a tight and clever construction. Rgds, Ivan

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Robert Howard 14 May 2007

I agree completely with Max. This is altogether fun and concise.

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Max Reif 01 May 2007

I enjoyed the playfulness! Sound and sense both. I like the progression from 'booked' to 'hooked'.

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Joscephine Gomez

Joscephine Gomez

Manila, Philippines
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