Tomorrow maybe, maybe not.
I sure think of it a lot.
Better, better I hope.
Another day, nope.
But I keep dreaming,
Everyday seeming,
Tomorrow maybe, maybe not.
When it happens, to be sure,
I'll be happy, that's the lure.
(June 11,2008, Katy, Texas)
Well, the best way is not to hope for anything and take your life the way it is... 'be what may'... great write :)
There is a great message in this poem Jim. I like the way you have spaced it out, as it works really well, also the rhyme adds to its effect. 'I'll be happy that's the lure, I will be dam happy that's the cure.' 10/10 Karin Anderson
Wow. Now this is a good poem! I can completely relate to this. Hope is such a wonderful thing. You've probably read it, but if you haven't I'm sure you'd enjoy Emily Dickens' ' Hope is the thing with feathers'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi jim i like this gets to the point hope or not well might be or not. yes i like it nice peice of work