Hot Ice Poem by James Bost

Hot Ice



suffering in this heat
came up like i was drugend
dehydrated from society
fight.........struggling

deneid by blue collars
trying to be some one
told cant make a couple of dollars

surrounded by speechless peers
frozen minded
see me embarressed of tears

cold world when u in the kitchen
steam through ur vaines
thinking bout the major things
that put u in pain

sits in between the doors
thats makes you think twice
may i be asking for more
of beginnig life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Cromer 10 July 2009

I really like your title. The poem has alot of real feeling in it. You describe things very clearly and strong. I like'frozen minded'. I understand. DC

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James Bost

James Bost

Baltimore Maryland
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