Friday, May 31, 2013

House Of Horror Comments

Rating: 5.0

Have you ever had a rendezvous with a bat?
Well I have, now what do you think of that!
Well it all kicked off, this particular night,
I'm feeling quite sleepy, with cocoa held tight,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2022

A terrific poem....gut-busting expression! Liked it

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Jayne Davies 13 June 2013

Thanks Keith, your feedback is appreciated! All the best!

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Keith Brown 12 June 2013

Read a few of your poems, I like them, rhyme and metre and this one is good fun

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Jayne Davies 06 June 2013

Thanks! Glad you like it!

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Kavya . 06 June 2013

hehehehe...v hilarious one!

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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