How A Poor Girl Lost A Diamond Shoe Poem by Ciara Mitchell

How A Poor Girl Lost A Diamond Shoe

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The story of a poor girl who lost a diamond shoe is one about love and care,
It’s been said a hundred times to you and now it’s my time to share.
It starts with a girl who was forced to stay in the house, clean up after three evil shrews
Who were mean unkind and rude and had to sleep with the mouse.

But that all changed when one day she was invited to the Princes ball and
She was all happy and glee she could picture her prince sweeping her off her feet.
But when she asked her stepmother if she could go she replied with a stern no.
She said “You’re ugly and you’re not that smarty now stop standing there and get

Your sisters ready for the party”. And after they left she went upstairs cried and had a fit
Then she said. “Now I’ll never meet my Prince”. And as she cried all night to where her fairy godmother stepped in and asked.” Are you alright? ” She sniffed and said “No my I want to go
The ball but my step mother won’t let me go at all.” She said. “I’m ugly and just an awful distaste, maybe she’s right maybe I don’t have what it takes.

The godmother said “I see your style I see you grace but honey you gone need dome fashion to match that pretty face”. And with that she gave her a beautiful blue dress and pretty diamond shoes she flew to the ball a in a carriage during a beautiful full moon. And when she got to the ball she made a grand entrance which maid prince charming intrigued and Impressed.
They danced together all night and fell in love until the clock struck twelve above and the
Girl ran so fast she almost flew to where all she left for the prince to find was a diamond shoe.

And With that shoe he swore to find his bride to which he had loved her deep inside
He traveled from house to house to look for his bride but to his surprise she was hard to find.
It wasn’t till the last house to where he tried the shoe with the three shrews he saw a mouse
To where it lead him to his boo and surprising to him he fit the diamond shoe. And they lived there lives for their hearts to capture I guess you could say they lived happily ever after.

Thursday, October 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fairy tale,story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 November 2015

Beautiful fairly tale depicting love and fate, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Ciara. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Chuy Amante 15 October 2015

Bravo! I stand and applaud and laud the pen of a god ess Ciara!

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