How Does It Feel Poem by Seema Jayaraman

How Does It Feel

Rating: 4.8


How does it feel Oh! My Heart
to be so unloved, be done apart
solitary in this bustling world
why must you fend alone

they whom you called your own
they tread low, cast you down
walk through, you don't exist
why my heart this low wail persists

Mend your ties with loneliness
its reign over your heart possess
the power inside of silence
universal love to your presence

lay all your hurts and despair
all this never did matter
love a mere illusion
Let God's light be your reason
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Copyright ©Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai 1993 All Rights Reserved

Tuesday, November 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My old scribbling dated 10Oct1993. Don't ask me why I wrote this, cant remember, must have imagined some slight or hurt from a near one.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

Mend your ties with loneliness its reign over your heart possess....Let God's light be your reason...Very interesting and fantastic poem shared in wise manner. Wisely penned....10

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Souren Mondal 04 November 2015

they whom you called your own they tread low, cast you down walk through, you don't exist why my heart this low wail persists A very difficult but often a seemingly inevitable situation in our life that we face... Thank you for sharing..

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Kelly Kurt 03 November 2015

It is interesting to look at poems written long ago and try to determine the state of mind at the time

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Seema Jayaraman 04 November 2015

Thanks Kelly, yes its very interesting to try and remember the feelings that must have elicited these lines. thanks.

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