poet Michael Fischer

Michael Fischer

How Does That Make You Feel?

You pinned me down and beat me senseless
at the time I was defenseless;
How does that make you feel?

You rubbed salt into my wounds
and I surrendered, but you refused to conclude;
How does that make you feel?

But you’re not as intimidating
when your friends aren’t participating;
How does that make you feel?

Come on blackguard, lay it on me;
Let me know what you think of me;
How does that make you feel?

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 27, 2007
Poem Edited: Monday, February 7, 2011

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  • ... Sheila (4/17/2007 1:34:00 PM)

    Yes, none of those guys alone would have likely had the nerve to do it. I like the structure and message of this poem. Great write.

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  • Duncan Wyllie (4/3/2007 11:59:00 AM)

    But you’re not as intimidating
    when your friends aren’t participating;
    How does that make you feel?

    How indeed?
    This is a very strong piece by you Michael, top marks a ten
    Love duncan X

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