Human Nature (Haiku) Poem by Smoky Hoss

Human Nature (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


We try to live right
-both in the day and the night-
Yet so oft, we fight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 01 March 2011

I don't know much about haiku Smokey, what I do know is that they are seventeen syllables. And you've done it one better, you rhymed it, it's great.

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