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- I Have Seen My Self-

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- I have seen my self-
(My projected being)

On the street where the path dissolves in crossing,
On a lone winter evening a silhouette silent and still,
Who art thou standing in lone painfulness?
Gazing at me with undulating gesture.
Oh you! You have come to take me in your arms?
In this silent evening no one is there to bid me farewell,
Will you wait a little, for a tiny bit of time?

I will to make a difference in my domicile.
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- I Have Seen My Self-
Saturday, November 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
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Rajnish Manga 25 November 2018

(1) I would first like to quote a couple of lines from this outstanding poem: In this dark indulgence my mind feels joy Unlimited.... Is this the end of the way? O mighty spirit! the joy of leaving, wait a little.... On the street where people forget to tread, I see your silent note invoking me to your shore.

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Prabir Gayen 25 November 2018

Rajnish Magna... extremely thankful to you for your comments..love and care..

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 November 2018

This is emotionally a very nice poetry Hope more such ones you compose so that guys like me also read t slowly and absorb your visions similes and metaphors in earnestness and then appreciate from the opponents shore what lies in this life shore after shore but invisibility of future and the mid ought to absorb life' has a meaning and end for sure Your poem is the harbinger of such a message may more read your moderna poetry God willing

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Prabir Gayen 24 November 2018

Thanks for your exceptionally beautiful comments....

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Rosie Bourget 21 July 2019

A wonderful poem that I read with great pleasure. I assume that all the readers will receive the message you want to convey. Thank you for inviting me to visit your page.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 December 2020

Oh you! You have come to take me in your arms? In this silent evening no one is there to bid me farewell, Will you wait a little, for a tiny bit of time? Very fine poem very imaginative. posing yourself.. to meet you. tony

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Biswajit Roy 01 September 2020

In this utter calmness all the birds into stillness, The wind stops blowing and drifting waves cease, Is this the time to sail across

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Biswajit Roy 01 September 2020

On the street where the path dissolves in crossing, On a lone winter evening a silhouette silent and still, Who art thou standing in lone painfulness? Gazing at me with undulating gesture

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Ayan Mondal 01 September 2020

On the street where the path dissolves in crossing, On a lone winter evening a silhouette silent and still, Who art thou standing in lone painfulness? Gazing at me with undulating gesture..! !

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Biswajit Roy 29 August 2020

On the street where the path dissolves in crossing, On a lone winter evening a silhouette silent and still, Who art thou standing in lone painfulness? Gazing at me with undulating gesture..! ! !

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