Hungry Stones - 8 Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Hungry Stones - 8

Rating: 5.0


(A poetic translation of a story by Rabindranath Tagore, kśhdhārto pāśhāņa, Hungry Stones, for convenience split in 13 parts) . It is set in blank verse with stanzas that rhymed in between.


VIII

A gulf separated my days and nights,
A worn out and tired me going to work,
Cursing last bewitching night's weird dream,
Yet, all new nights came O pledging promise,
Though shackles of work were farther from sham,
The nightfall would catch me in eerie thrall,
Overwhelming me in a total snare,
Intoxicating and overpowering,
When I would transform to an unknown knight
Of a bygone era, playing my part
In unknown history never ere writ,
My English coat and tight breeches standing
The least in my fertile mind's fairy role,
In red velvet cap, pyjamas too loose,
An embroidered tight vest, flowing silk gown,
Many a shaded scented handkerchiefs,
Musing o'er an elaborate toilet,
I'd sit on a high-cushioned velvet chair,
A hookah filled with rose water in place
Of a usual cigarette, a proud face,
In eager anticipation to meet,
Who else? My first night's sorely missed nymphet,
Black beast, my aversion and dark secret,
But for that spoil-sport eunuch's blocking feet!
_____________________________________________
Translations | 08.03.13 |

Wednesday, August 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lust,passion,suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 29 August 2019

Another wonderful part sir! You might be spending a lot of time in translating the original work so immaculately! Line 12 & 13 are my favorite lines! I will read the remaining parts of this series a little later. For this part.....................10/10

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 29 August 2019

Thank you once again Dr Swain. Yes, such translations do take a lot of time and efforts, and have to be chiselled a couple of times over a span of time.

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
Close
Error Success