Hurdles - Lifespan X 1 Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Hurdles - Lifespan X 1

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Obstacles, do come our way, normally
Barriers, confronted, as we engage on things
Constrains, experienced only when we perform
Discouragements ‘n regrets, are realities in life
Derailments ‘n breakdowns are eventualities

No obstacle seem totally insurmountable
No barrier is impenetrable in entirety
No constrain remains unsolvable at all
No discouragement 'n regret, once faced
should remain entirely unbeatable, for ever

Let willingness awake you, for a fresh day
Allow courage give strength to the new way
When determination sets in, for what ever it may
Sure, you'll accomplish your objective
even partially, at the end of the day

Hurdles - Lifespan X 1
Thursday, January 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: courage,destination,lifespan,lifestyle,living
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Picture - Writer's own
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 January 2017

Willingness awakes with fresh day. Light does miracle in day with imagery. Obstacles come in life but having knowledge we face them with courage and find happiness. No discouragement captures us. Wonderful drafting is shared here definitely. Very nice poem is shared of course...10

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 19 January 2017

Thank you Kumar for your generous comment. Wishing you the very best of every thing in life with the dawning of a new year.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 January 2017

For willingness a fresh day awakes and allows us to have courage in new way. Getting nice rays of light we never get discouragement. Life blooms with knowledge. Very wonderful and interesting poem this is.10

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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