I Wonder Why……..! Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

I wonder, I wonder why ……….! how is it that the first two comments make it sound as though the readers understood your poem completely and thought it was excellent? must be a language/culture barrier which I am unable to break through while reading. I dare say that many ‘english-as-second-or third-language’ readers would have a lot of trouble understanding (some at least) of my poems I sometimes thought, while reading, that the poem was anthropomorphizing birds and the life of birds at or away from a nest. other times I thought you were talking about some ‘problems’ or at least changes happening or which had happened in a human family. [it is true that sometimes I’ve heard of a family’s home referred to as a ‘nest’.] ============================================================== ACTUALLY, I came to this poem with the motive of leaving a message for the poet which I’m not allowed to send via PH’s message system (inbox/outbox) . I want to thank Jayatissa for the following poem comment on my poem: [THANKS FOR THIS COMMENT]: Date & Time: 1/29/2016 6: 24: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 44569172 - Looking For Love... [inspired By Ph Poet Kim Barney (He Is A Guy!) : Humor; Semi-True About Bri; Short (Enough) ] Member: Jayatissa K. Liyanage Comment: Ha.....ha....ha....! I earnestly hope your fifth wife, if ever you have one, will tell you that you have too much of brain. What will be your reaction Bri, if she says so? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Jayatissa, the comment (above) I understand completely! well, a fifth wife could only do worse than the first ones if she said I had ‘negative-brain’! ! ! if #5 were to say “you have too much of brain” ….i would, of course, have to agree with her! bri :)

very nicely said, imagery is so nice to write, very mature write.. will be happy if you visit my pages..

A mature way to write. I like your style. Awesome! Keep on writing and please do read my poems