Hurricane Impressions Poem by Barry Middleton

Hurricane Impressions

Rating: 5.0


it's very clear she's coming
that's what the whisper says
that hisses in the pines

so many years ago
I learned the signs to watch
a change is in the air

the palm trees start to pray
their folded fronds
turn from the wind

a sleeping giant oak
stretches her limbs and sways
like a goddess waking

now it's about to start
the breeze picks up
and birds make their escape

the tropic deity I worship
is angry now
someone disturbed her rest

and she becomes the hurricane
and yet I see no malice
nature takes its course

the trees are in a frenzy
wildly tossing their heads
an empty protest

Hurricane Impressions
Tuesday, October 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fate,nature,storm
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 05 October 2017

A wonderful description of the hurricane. The reader can visualize everything. Vivid yet subtle. Loved it. A big 10.

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Dimitrios Galanis 04 October 2017

Beautifully described the scene of the coming tempest. You see the picture in front of your eyes.That's whar does an excellent poem like this.

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