Hurt Poem by Jennifer Birchall

Hurt

Rating: 4.3


I can't bare this pain the intensity
hundreds of daggers pushed deeply twisting inside
Thoughts insanely torture my mind
Screams so loud I can barely think
Dreams I get no peace either
Nightmares, soul torn by demons
Of my own creation
Please make it stop it's got great power over me
I feel so weak I'm going to break
I'm desperate to be strong
To fight this unimaginable hurt

Saturday, November 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak,hurting,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 15 December 2018

A poem of pain and nightmares!

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 November 2018

Nightmares, soul torn by demons Of my own creation Please make it stop it's got great power over me I feel so weak I'm going to break.. very pathetic situation. you have described with so much of life that the reader falls into your words.. thank u. tony

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

Tony you always give me such lovely feedback. I appreciate your kind words

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Cheshire, England
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