I go crazy now a day
To esteem you my dear Sun
Your shine, your rays
Hot.. Pierce my skin
Sweat me and drench even
I go crazy now a day
To worship you my dear Moon
Your milky shine, your smiling face
Make me gaze and gaze at you
And lost at you in merry thoughts
I go crazy now a day
To adore you my blue sky
Your sight, you void, beloved plane
Make me feel floating with
Foamy white, and grey folks
Brewing out of frisky frost
I go crazy now a day
To admire you my dear stars
Twinkling with frolic comets
Make me feel jealous of you
To be there, there in glee
Do you know it? why I am
Feeling crazy on you, dear
You only could see my love
Day and night n’ round the clock
Vow! You are totally smitten. The words carefully picked show the feelings. All the best.
it's that wee bit of craziness that gives us our identity...don't stop being crazy!
a very beautiful write. great lines. fine composition. you leave me crazy. voted10 surya
you are not crazy my dear, this is the glee of a real poet. these things worth their existence when the poet like you gleefully dance in words. wonderful
Anyone would go crazy with so many things to love. Great job.
I go crazy now a day To esteem your wonderful poetry Your words, their meanings powerful, Pierce my soul like a lighening..........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lovely and amusing... with a love on nature..God's gift... the beautiful and significance of the Sun... thanks for sharing.... 10+++ lovelots, maia