I Am Pure Love, Poem by Marie Bliss

I Am Pure Love,

Rating: 5.0


when I act like I'm not
Don't believe me.
I change everyday,
I'm nothing that you can
put your finger on.
I'm looking, even for myself.
What can you expect?
If you are my friend,
you will allow me to be what
I am.
I'm pure love,
on a journey.
Don't believe the rest.
Though i have walked through
lifetimes of pain, anger, regret
and violence
I'm none of these.
Those are not things I am.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zack Burton 02 March 2010

I love this poem, but I can't help noticing the spelling errors. Beleive - Believe and arn't - aren't. It's jagged, jumpy - good

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 May 2016

Though i have walked through lifetimes of pain, anger, regret and violence I'm none of these. Those are not things I am. experience teaches us and mend our ways and if we are God-seeking we land in pure love.... thank you dear poetess for your sublime views..... tony god bless u

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Emma Adamyan 02 June 2010

10/10. short, smart and directly into the heart

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David Abrahams 28 May 2010

Very, Very Nice. 'When I act like I'm not, don't believe me.' Brilliant.

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Dew Twinkle 24 May 2010

love it, the first three kines, how I get that I idea, ha ha. keep it Marie, really like your poems :)

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Dulakshi Wakista 03 March 2010

I really loved and enjoyed your poem.Well expressed.Lovely poem.Thanks for sharing.

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