Wednesday, May 16, 2012

I Am.... (Rotting Wood) Comments

Rating: 4.5

i am...
the old man smell of rotting wood,
the stagnant pool of water,
devoid of life!
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Eric Cockrell
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Juan Olivarez 18 May 2012

this is just awesome, great poem, great ending.

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Dave Walker 17 May 2012

The shadow dancing by your grave, I've seen that a few times. A great poem.

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Christopher Cariad 16 May 2012

Such a beautiful poem!

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Patti Masterman 16 May 2012

This has some killer lines. This is my second try at commenting, hope this one takes.

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