I Am Struck By Your Appearance-Completely Poem by Fallen Too Far

I Am Struck By Your Appearance-Completely



Imagine
In your head
(Perhaps close your eyes)
What it is like
-A small comparison-

To step into a room
A room full of people.
A room full of men, and women.
And children
And in this room

This large, crowded, lunging room
That once you enter it
Everything stops.
(Not some things, but all things)

And immediately everything
In it-the room-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 04 July 2007

Wow! I was expecting 'Some enchanted evening'. What a shocker. Great twist at the end, a turn of the unexpected. Excellent write.

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