I Asked The Universe Poem by Barbara Villabol

I Asked The Universe

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I asked the universe for you.
I described you. I put in my request.

Compassionate
Passionate
Quick witted
Strong willed

Here

You are not what I expected
And you are all I asked for

In your eyes I see pain, kindness
vengeance, conviction, curiosity
friendship, love
empathy, anger, remorse

I have compassion for you beyond all I remember having for any man.

Now

In your presence,
I dance

Desire, so intense
I wake and find my arms aching for you.

I am terrified

My heart will burst.

Monday, September 8, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A surprise love, he died three years later.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 17 December 2008

I really like the message here. It is well expressed. Love is a wonderful thing to describe. GW62

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James B. Earley 09 September 2008

It seems.....the Universe answered.....in its own....unique.....way! Here's to......a great life............together.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 September 2008

A lovely poem. Enjoyed.

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