I Can Feel You Poem by Jaya Das

I Can Feel You

Rating: 4.8


Oh singer! the fact that you know?
When those words jumping out of your mouth
One after the other, form a row
Dancing in a tune, holding every beat, they go on flow
And O' my heart feels like the golden coat of Sun
Is gently covering the cold, white snow
Like when water oozes out to heal my burning skin
The wind carrying it away, kisses me and blow
Like a ragpicker scrounging in a garbage heap
When a glare lights his blind eyes, discovering a penny or two
At night on the dark sky as the moon spreads its glow
Like after a long run, when you stop and rest
You start aging, your throbbing heart beats slow
And I lost myself from the outside world
Coz I dive too deep into the depth of your words
In a search of my being inside your music
An unknowing journey on your musical car, I start
Collecting small fragments of myself inside you
I see my destination inside core of your heart
Gradually my subconscious hits my senses and
O' my search ends there, finding myself, I get apart
O dear singer! this fact you never knew
But its true, with every single note that bloom,
I can so feel the fragrance of you.

Sunday, December 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: music
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pijush Biswas 04 December 2016

mind blowing... touches my heart really... try your best... rhyme and rhythm are to be more developed... good,

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Jaya Das 04 December 2016

Thank you so much sir n thanks a lot for your suggestion surely work into it

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Siddartha Montik 04 December 2016

You made it so is many must Love the idea of Love with this Poem! thanks for sharing! 10++

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Jaya Das 04 December 2016

Many many thanks ☺☺

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Sister Frances 04 December 2016

You've used music as a beautiful metaphor throughout this poem. Very clever my friend. I loved the way this love song took me on a journey :)

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Jaya Das 04 December 2016

Thank you for your words of appreciation

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