I Can'T Breathe Poem by Kristie Isaak

I Can'T Breathe

Rating: 5.0


deep pain.........its hurting me
my heart empty.........what happened to thee
chest tight.........dont say those hurtful words
friend comes running.........theres no laughing
rush of rain........all i see are clear skies
makeup smeared.........im all in tears
gimme that towel.........blue as his eyes

Tuesday, November 6, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: hurting,running
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 April 2008

ease your pain by extricating the unwanted pleasures............

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this is so good. my favorite was the last line. it kinda gave insight to what the poem is about...or maybe i'm reading too much into it. either way, i like it.

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Ninja Kitten 06 December 2007

luv it the part i liked was chest tight, don't say those hurtful words, i give that line to my ex.

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Jona`e Levett 09 November 2007

thats so sad. my favorite line...: rush of rain.....all i see are clear skies. that made the poem. i loved it!

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