Thursday, July 3, 2014

I Can'T Escape From Here Comments

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Drowning in the despair of my mind,
peace of soul I cannot find.
Demons are raging inside of me,
break my cage and set me free.
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Kathy Liu
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Eugene Levich 03 July 2014

A very forceful, touching, well formed poem. If you discover The Way - the Tao - you will be able to accept life as it is.

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Colleen Courtney 03 July 2014

Such a heartbreaking poem of lost hope and despair. Has beautiful flow. Can feel the desperation of just wanting an end to all the sadness, madness and cruelty of the world. Although such a sad poem and it very well written.

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Soumita Sarkar 03 July 2014

Excellent poem on loss..pain..and despair............I loved it....like it tore my heart into pieces.....Thanks.

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Kassem Oude 03 July 2014

Most beautiful writing and rhyming. But life could be more beautiful you should accept it and mend it. I had such life before.

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