I Can't Fail Poem by Mahfooz Ali

I Can't Fail



I have to stay with what I do?
I can never forget, what is so true?
I need to take care of things,
So there are not so many dings,
I need to understand the world around me,
So I can find the key....................

I don't need to run,
From the things I have done,
I want to travel everywhere,
But then still take care, I need to ask,
And not hide under a mask............

I need to share, I need to care,
I need to get off the shelf,
And not hate myself,
I need to enjoy life,
And not sit home and strife...................

I don't need to race,
I need to set a pace,
I need to stay calm,
And act like a palm,
I can't be stale,
And I can't fail............

Tuesday, December 30, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: despair
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nia Riz 30 December 2008

a nice poem...pretty well written....but i actually feel some lines are created just for the sake of giving rhymes...try avoiding that....its not necessary to have rhymes for poetry....being a professional writer, you might already know that. Anyways....a good poem actually! Nia

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Mahfooz Ali

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Lucknow (U.P.) India
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