I Love My Family So Much. Poem by Mahfooz Ali

I Love My Family So Much.

Rating: 4.9


To be a part of a family like mine
is so divine
where love is shown
hurt is shared
our love for each other is never impaired

we talk
we laugh
we cry
but we are a family
and we do it all together
for as a family
we do it all as one

you hurt one
you hurt all
and as a family unit
we will all stand tall
for we are family
a family full of strength
a family full of love
a family no one can touch
that's why I love my family so much.

I Love My Family So Much.
Monday, August 27, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: family life,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Myra Zack 15 February 2008

It is a simple poem yet means a lot. if u're having a problem, its good to know that u still have ur family behind u.

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Hali Curtis 12 October 2007

your lucky! ! I love my family to its just my cusin i dislike him alot but the rest are cool with me! lol thats great that u and ur family get along so great! Keep up the great poems! ~Hali C.

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Chinedu Dike 24 May 2015

The essence of family as a social institution, well depicted in the poem. A home which has love as its foundation is heaven felt on Earth. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kim Barney 26 February 2015

A beautiful poem. Would be even better with two small changes. In line one, you didn't mean APART (one word): you really meant A PART (two words) . And in the last line, you should use THAT'S instead of THAT, S Keep on writing!

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Mahfooz Ali 08 April 2018

Thanks for pointing silly mistakes Kim.

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Nzuzo malope 05 March 2020

Yes I will feed them

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ronel 06 February 2020

what is it abou? why is it for?

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Kingsley Egbukole 13 November 2019

Great family love. Beautiful. Give you a 10. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments

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F_rosefuentevilla 17 September 2019

Great poem. Hoping I have that kind of family.

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HarryJJL23 06 July 2019

Lovely poem love it superb.....thanks for this poem it means a lot to me

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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