Mahfooz Ali

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I Love My Family So Much. - Poem by Mahfooz Ali

To be a part of a family like mine
is so divine
where love is shown
hurt is shared
our love for each other is never impaired

we talk
we laugh
we cry
but we are a family
and we do it all together
for as a family
we do it all as one

you hurt one
you hurt all
and as a family unit
we will all stand tall
for we are family
a family full of strength
a family full of love
a family no one can touch
that's why I love my family so much.

Topic(s) of this poem: family life, love and life


Comments about I Love My Family So Much. by Mahfooz Ali

  • Ojok Isaac (8/9/2018 11:12:00 AM)


    wow! it is a nice one indeed (Report) Reply

    (8/20/2018 7:10:00 PM)

    awesome pomes about lovey

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  • (7/19/2018 2:26:00 PM)


    A great poem I will share it at my family reunion this weekend. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (7/18/2018 4:56:00 AM)


    Wonderful and lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • (6/7/2018 11:16:00 PM)


    this poem is reality. thankyou for the inspiration (Report) Reply

  • (6/5/2018 4:25:00 AM)


    I love this poem (Report) Reply

  • (6/5/2018 4:25:00 AM)


    Nice poem (Report) Reply

  • (5/18/2018 4:40:00 AM)


    That was a good poem.
    I like your poem.
    (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2018 9:28:00 AM)


    Nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (4/22/2018 11:32:00 PM)


    This is what a perfect family life stands for.
    I love it. Thanks a lot.
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2018 5:51:00 AM)


    Very nice poem (Report) Reply

  • (1/31/2018 8:41:00 AM)


    I love this poem! I will share it at my next concert! (Report) Reply

    (4/8/2018 10:00:00 AM)

    My email is:

    mailtomahfooz@gmail.com

    (4/8/2018 9:46:00 AM)

    Thank You so much Taylor. Inform me for sure...

    Best,

    Mahfooz

  • (12/23/2017 6:39:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (5/24/2015 10:15:00 AM)


    The essence of family as a social institution, well depicted in the poem. A home which has love as its foundation is heaven felt on Earth. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • (3/8/2015 7:50:00 PM)


    .....a most beautiful tribute to family.. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (2/26/2015 8:15:00 PM)


    A beautiful poem. Would be even better with two small changes. In line one, you didn't mean APART (one word): you really meant A PART (two words) .
    And in the last line, you should use THAT'S instead of THAT, S
    Keep on writing!
    (Report) Reply

    Mahfooz Ali (4/8/2018 9:49:00 AM)

    Thanks for pointing silly mistakes Kim.

  • (11/27/2013 1:27:00 PM)


    it was beautiful it made me cry (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2008 9:47:00 AM)


    thank you for shareing yourself with all of us
    and I need borrow your poem in my blog.
    if you dont want please tell me at edennohanafuyu@gmail.com or
    click http: //mylittlechilds.blogspot.com
    I hope you will permit
    thank you
    (Report) Reply

  • (2/15/2008 9:10:00 AM)


    It is a simple poem yet means a lot. if u're having a problem, its good to know that u still have ur family behind u. (Report) Reply

  • (10/12/2007 4:41:00 PM)


    your lucky! ! I love my family to its just my cusin i dislike him alot but the rest are cool with me! lol thats great that u and ur family get along so great! Keep up the great poems!

    ~Hali C.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 27, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 8, 2018


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