Ferrizza Rivera


I Can'T Please Everybody - Poem by Ferrizza Rivera

I don't know where I trully belong
They judging me all day long
It seems no one can understand my silence
Then I found myself in a cold room of loneliness

Topic(s) of this poem: judgement

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

My first week in college experienced

Comments about I Can'T Please Everybody by Ferrizza Rivera

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (7/25/2017 4:21:00 AM)


    cold room of loneliness, judging me,
    where I trully belong.. these are the key points i collected from your poem.. thanky ou very much dear poetess.
    it is short and to the point......yes we cn never please everyone, it is true. pleasing others and to live like that is not good.
    your being and your thinking is important.... nice poem.. thank you for sharing. tony
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  • Jazib Kamalvi (3/14/2017 11:03:00 PM)


    Seems a target of fooling by seniors in college. (Report) Reply

    Maria Ferrizza Rivera (3/14/2017 11:32:00 PM)

    kinda

  • Saadat Tahir (2/7/2017 12:28:00 AM)

    dont know...
    You might not now where you belong
    Indeed the judgmental thing goes along
    None around fathoms your silence
    You mustn’t despair, be lost in loneliness

    Soon the mists will clear
    There will be a rainbow so near
    You’ll reach out, touch it with a smile
    Bliss and luster will be your style

    ...nice lil poem
    liked
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  • (9/17/2015 6:10:00 PM)


    May God Almighty bless you and find peace (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/4/2015 12:23:00 PM)


    It seems no one can understand my silence
    Then I found myself in a cold room of loneliness
    dont worry if they dont understand your silence. dont be lonely because of that. later there will be people who understand you and your silence. Silence is golden they say. thank you
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 1, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 2, 2015


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