Unknown Sadness Poem by Ferrizza Rivera

A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Ferrizza.

full of emotions. what makes you cry when you see the passing clouds. expressive of your internal struggle, pain. thank you dear Poetess.

Wind whispered on my ears Then I cried without tears...he wants me to be sunny............ a fine poem do not be sad little sister poetess...... smile always because God cares for you........ it is true.......God is your sunshine.. tony

Dear Ferrizza, you feel emptiness and sadness but it is written soft and mild as Nocturnes of Chopin!

A great start with a nice poem, Rivera. That is poetic sadness. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks.

A great start with a nice poem, Rivera. That is poetic sadness. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

please write more i would like to read your poems and comment