Without my sword i can fight
Every brave and every knight
Without my eyes i can catch
Every signal and every flash
Without my wings i can fly
To every star in the sky
Without my tears i can cry
On every girl and every guy
With out your love i could die
In every way and my reality deny
Between your hands i put my soul
Nothing but your happiness is my goal
All my love i will give
Just open your heart and let me live.
I honestly cant say i find anything wrong with this poem. it was brilliant! the only thing i suggest doing is not writing the title in all caps. its kinda annoying just so u know. :) great poem! hugs^-^
brilliant! ! ! a great imagery in a framework of goods rhymes and deep thoughts. Please read up my poem 'beauty of the endless night'.
Wow! this has an AMAZING transition! ! ! I love it :) 10+! ! ! !
that is very strong in my heart.
vow beautifull and lovely poem.posted10 surya
wooow its lovely i really liked it
without my tears i can cry... open your heart and let me live most touching... loved it
this one is really impressive. the smoothness of the words and balance between the meanings and the sounds on the letters give this poem importance and great value. I like this one that I read it more than once. waiting for more
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Well penned... Such a lovely poem.. ^-^