I Cannot Survive Poem by Justice For All

I Cannot Survive

Rating: 4.3

Without my sword i can fight
Every brave and every knight
Without my eyes i can catch
Every signal and every flash
Without my wings i can fly
To every star in the sky
Without my tears i can cry
On every girl and every guy
With out your love i could die
In every way and my reality deny
Between your hands i put my soul
Nothing but your happiness is my goal
All my love i will give
Just open your heart and let me live.

Lily Law 27 March 2009

Well penned... Such a lovely poem.. ^-^

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Hakurasen Lee 26 March 2009

I honestly cant say i find anything wrong with this poem. it was brilliant! the only thing i suggest doing is not writing the title in all caps. its kinda annoying just so u know. :) great poem! hugs^-^

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Allan Macli Borges 23 March 2009

brilliant! ! ! a great imagery in a framework of goods rhymes and deep thoughts. Please read up my poem 'beauty of the endless night'.

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Ken Suh 23 March 2009

Wow! this has an AMAZING transition! ! ! I love it :) 10+! ! ! !

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Mitchell Glasbrenner 18 March 2009

that is very strong in my heart.

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Surya . 07 June 2009

vow beautifull and lovely poem.posted10 surya

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Noha El3wdy 20 May 2009

wooow its lovely i really liked it

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3wwad 52 12 April 2009

soooooooooooooo lovely.

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Jane 92 11 April 2009

without my tears i can cry... open your heart and let me live most touching... loved it

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Sas Na 29 March 2009

this one is really impressive. the smoothness of the words and balance between the meanings and the sounds on the letters give this poem importance and great value. I like this one that I read it more than once. waiting for more

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