Without my sword i can fight
Every brave and every knight
Without my eyes i can catch
Every signal and every flash
Without my wings i can fly
To every star in the sky
Without my tears i can cry
On every girl and every guy
But...
With out your love i could die
In every way and my reality deny
Between your hands i put my soul
Nothing but your happiness is my goal
All my love i will give
Just open your heart and let me live.
There's not much I can say aside from, the fact that it is deep original and well written, hopefully one of the beginning of more to come
Hun Great poem one type out though look it over other than that its great use of words -ash
without my tears i can cry... open your heart and let me live most touching... loved it
this one is really impressive. the smoothness of the words and balance between the meanings and the sounds on the letters give this poem importance and great value. I like this one that I read it more than once. waiting for more
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's amazing, beautiful piece of poetry.................I am in a state of shocked silence in honour of your miracles.