Justice For All


Tips For Lovers - Poem by Justice For All

Open your eyes you will know
that her love is who wants to go
don't try to follow or catch
her love because it's like a flash
put your sadness away
and try to live your day
you might later say
my heart isn't a toy for play
if you ever felt alone
forget she was born
just look up and wish
her love was from the past
be careful be smart
and build a siege
around your heart
hold your soldiers
and give them the order
stay back don't move any closer
hold your tears
and stay away from your fears
throw all the keys
perhaps your heart
will live in peace
don't search for
another queen
the last one was
so selfish and mean
no one deserves to put the crown
no one deserves to rule your town
i pray for your soul each day
to find her soul mate and stay


Comments about Tips For Lovers by Justice For All

  • Saadat Tahir (7/12/2010 9:19:00 AM)

    a potent and hard hitting statement

    well penned

    hold your tears
    and stay away from your fears
    throw all the keys
    perhaps your heart
    will live in peace
    don't search for
    another queen
    the last one was
    so selfish and mean


    cheers
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  • (5/10/2009 4:09:00 PM)

    aaah! ! this is so nyc nd shwit...great poem! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/20/2009 12:32:00 AM)

    well written piece about lovers way...Nice poetic ending you have put up...Thanks! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/26/2009 9:27:00 PM)

    I love all ur poems! i cant say anything about this one either! lol it was amazing like all ur other work. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/15/2009 12:46:00 PM)

    it`s cool i like the rhyme in the lines and although the in the last lines u stress to avoid love i think u put hope behinds the lines what`s going is better.......well done (Report)Reply

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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (3/15/2009 10:44:00 AM)

    wonderfully written. failure of love to gives pleasure. shan (Report)Reply

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  • (3/15/2009 9:52:00 AM)

    Everybdy has a soul mate, and we will go through so many failed relationships to find him or her. This poem talks negatively about affairs of the heart, but when a relationship fails, it is actually no one's fault. The love interest just fades and there is nothing more in common. But always keep searching for you soul mate because she isout there waiting for you to find her. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing.

    Love & hugs,
    Barbara
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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (3/15/2009 9:41:00 AM)

    Good tips for young lovers, but I am too old for these tips. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/14/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Very nice poem I really liked it I congratulate you(i gave you a ten) .just keep writting (Report)Reply

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  • (3/14/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Very nice poem I really liked it I congratulate you(i gave you a ten) .just keep writting (Report)Reply

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  • (3/14/2009 12:11:00 PM)

    Very nice poem I really liked it I congratulate you(i gave you a ten) .just keep writting (Report)Reply

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  • (3/14/2009 11:05:00 AM)

    not bad, well written, every person has some original ideas. so do you. (Report)Reply

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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (3/10/2009 5:35:00 AM)

    Nice and simple poem for love and lovers. May God accept your prayer! Keep on loving and writing.
    Best Wishes
    Naseer
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  • Ershad Mazumder (3/9/2009 9:05:00 PM)

    I am in love with my fiance for many decades. I am yet to meet her. I am just waiting for her.Oneday she will meet me. Your poem is really good. Keep on writing and share with us. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/9/2009 7:15:00 PM)

    Nice tips! I like it... the words are simple yet stylish. Keep it up! A 10... (Report)Reply

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  • Fay Slimm (3/9/2009 1:22:00 AM)

    The tips you give here are all sound and written with style - - a fresh and flowing write - - keep it up and very best wishes - a 10 from Fay... (Report)Reply

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  • (3/9/2009 12:22:00 AM)

    this is a very good poem
    i like it
    great start keep er up
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  • Marilyn Lott (3/8/2009 4:46:00 PM)

    A lot of feeling in this poem. Your ideas and priorities change with time as you are very young, but off to a good start. Keep writing and sharing.

    Best Wishes,
    Marilyn
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 2, 2009



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