I Cant Name That Pain Comments

Great sentiments and well versed. Probably this can be a good advocate for homeless or for the pooer people. Nice work.

How you have expressed the very same sentiments I feel on seeing such sights! Onething so depressing to see is the starved face of a human particularly that of a child! While on one side, people spulrge in a plethora of dishes, on the other side, people raiding dust bins for bits of food with stray dogs! A great write especially with the notes given below! A10

You don't need to name the pain or make your poem rhyme. Words from a caring person are said in a special language that is so beautiful. Not everyone understands, but those of us who do, feel united with you and understand you perfectly. Blessings to you.

Very poignant and the truth we see us around but fail to express and turn away helpless that you have successfully portrayed here.......Pradipji.....very well composed....

We are destroying the earth and we have paved to destroy the generation yet to come...nice poem with the great message save earth save human