I Crossed A Field Comments

Beautiful, , I can feel how peaceful this day must have been

A soft pastoral poem penned with a fine nib. A watercolor piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

A soft and soothing poem! A beautiful read Andrew! ! *10*! ! ! Thank you for sharing! ! ! Best regards , Friend Thad

i do normal like to give advice but it is very hard it all ryhmes perfectly and very fluent, just dont change to quiickly on one subject, slowly change.

I love the rhyme and rhythm of this poem. It is so fluid in its movement that it reminds me of a spring bathed in country air. Very, very nice!