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I Cry

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when would war ends?
When would foes turn to friends?
With what've seen, i cry
when would tears never flow?
When would smile ever grow?
Dana air-crash beats my heart then i cry
When would i ever laugh?
For the world is rough.
So i cry
when would our garments never stain?
When would truth and holiness ever reign?
I washed my garment and again stained, then i cry
Mama when would i never fail?
Papa when would my head never turn to tail?
I shake my head then i cry
since i must strive
sister when would the kingdom arrive?
I wandered round and round then i cry
my people tell me when would crime decrease?
When would the hell prisoners release?
O i cry
worries and anxieties
tanks alot i wish to have u as frnd on facebook.whats ur username?
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karen thanks alot.i wish to have u as friend on facebook. Whats ur username?
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interesting and good
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Karen Sinclair 30 June 2012
A really lovely piece which has such great potential but (and i am being honest) i hope you dont mind... How you have laid out this write makes it difficult (for me) to read.. Which is a shame as i love the actual words and pleading sentiment. Great potential... i really hope you do not mind my thoughts and please remember that they are just my opinion... thank you.. karen
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