Thursday, September 18, 2008

I'D Like The World To Sing Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'd like to build the world a home
and furnish it with love,
Grow apple trees and honey bees
and snow-white turtle doves.
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Divya Dharshini
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Shyam Balaji 02 December 2008

hey dharshini, Lovely poem again...good imagination..keep going..i liked this poem best of the other two..

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 26 September 2008

Very well written Divya.A lovely poem. Thank you.

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Kesav Easwaran 26 September 2008

good song on harmony...harmonious...no discord any where in between lines...well done, Divya...10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 September 2008

I would like to 'furnish it with love'! wow! fine composition............10

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