I Dont Know Why But I Want To Cry* Poem by Rebeckah Schroeder

I Dont Know Why But I Want To Cry*

Rating: 5.0


This is my favorite poem so far.

I feel an emptiness inside of me,
I feel pain that really isn't there,
I feel like someone is following me,
but there is no one behind me.
All this leads too...
I dont know why but I want to cry.

I want someone there to comfort me,
I want a shoulder to cry on,
I want someone to understand.
And I dont know why but I want to cry.

I don't know why but I want to cry.
My tears wont fall,
My heart just aches,
My smile stays down,
and my soul just shakes.

My secrets stay hidden,
my thoughts stay locked,
my fears keep reappearing,
everywhere I go.
And I dont know why but I want to cry.
And I dont know why but I want to cry.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i love it, it reminds me so much of myself, what ive gone through... i love it

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Vijay Sai R 19 June 2009

its touching, its sensitive! it speaks!

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I Am Charlie 18 June 2009

and can't, because there's no where to turn... full empathy. my thoughts exactly. And its worse 'cause you don't know why.

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Michelle Mcintyre 18 June 2009

That is a beautiful poem. I hope all is well with you.

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