Sunday, July 9, 2023

I Dream Comments

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I DREAM
I dream of ducks and horses, surpassing dark forces

I dream of adventure in the clouds, the dangers abound
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Kevin J. Muricio
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June Gray 24 November 2025

It's a simple poem, but beautiful, and great form.

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Ajit Saigal 27 September 2024

Your dreams take flight on wings of might, In skies of hope, you chase the light.

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Adookorn Auaduma 05 June 2024

Beautiful and nice to read

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 07 February 2024

interesting dreaming; nice to read

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 December 2023

Nice to read that you have dreams, a funny poem about your dreams. Thank you for sharing

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 December 2023

I cite you in your poem: I dream of light for my own sight, it seems right for my lone' flight. Good end rhymes and the poem reads good in its rhymes.

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Kevin J. Muricio 05 January 2024

Thank you. Your words inspire me to write more.

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Amir Sanjari 30 November 2025

I just joined the site. I would appreciate it if you could give me your opinion on my poem.

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Brian De-Costa 13 July 2023

Good that you have dreams.

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