I Drunk The Sea! Poem by V.Muthu Manickam

I Drunk The Sea!



Glittering was the evening Sun's face

Glided down unto the level of my surface


Wobbled were the waves of the ocean

Rays reflected by the waves, for a reason


Water level was on the declining trend

Enticing beauty of the scene was grand


Decline of water was at a high pace

I could gaze the clear view of the space


Eventually exterminated was the sea,

In a short time you may take for a tea!


Sacredly sailing was the setting Sun

Though the whole drama indeed, is a fun,


As the emptied water was packed in a bottle

And as if I drunk the sea, in a magic battle!



Above Poem was adapted from the eBook "Eagle Educates Endurance and Other Poems on Nature" authored by Mr.V.Muthu manickam. Copyrights reserved!

Saturday, August 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: drink,fun,mystical,sea,sun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is the actual poetic narration of my personal experience while drinking water from a bottle!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 September 2019

just so beautiful coming from the pen and bottle of a great poet and author do read my poems sir MOMS SMILES ANDDO ENDEAR POET ME IS SO CLEAR DON'T FEAR UR A GREATER POET SIR I DRANK THE ATLANTIC WHOLE OF IT AS I swum into it thanks 'twas a high tide else it would have been a good by PLACE NEW JERSEY last week

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Vmuthu Manickam 05 September 2019

Wow! I am delighted on your joy in the read! ! I am sure, more shall follow. Thanks for sharing the joy so openly and plainly.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 August 2019

Drunk the sea, great write and it is meaningful

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Vmuthu Manickam 24 August 2019

Thank you Mishra ji. It is an actual experience of my life on a fine evening while I was drinking water from a bottle. Immediately I had translated my emotions into the above!

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V.Muthu Manickam

V.Muthu Manickam

Peraiyur, Madurai District, India
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