I Feel Alone Poem by Anne Jones

I Feel Alone



I feel alone lost in my despair
Nobody to listen, to help guide one down the path
No matter what I try to do to make it better I still can't fight and the climb seems like the impossible
Extend a hand and pull me out
I am tired
If you are so mighty why don't you help
You seem to know my path so damn it take me to it
Are you going to leave me here to suffer and wonder
Some days I wish you would guide me to the pills
It doesn't seem like such a difficult task to handle
What is meant to be will be isn't that what they say?
Make it stop make it go away
If that is something you cannot do then what will be will be
I guess I hold the answer to that statement

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leke Adeleke 23 July 2011

Anne, i must say this is a beautiful piece.I could create a mental picture as i read along, nice.but the third line is too long, u could pass the message across in lesser words.pls read my 'Your Royal shyness' let me know how u feel about it.bye

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