Gordon David

Rookie - 6 Points (1st September 1959 / Edinburgh)

I Feel So Tired - Poem by Gordon David

I feel so tired, I just want to go to bed
I feel so tired, I’ll just curl up here instead
I feel so tired, I just want to go to sleep
I feel so tired, I’m sick of counting sheep
I feel so tired, I can’t even think
I feel so tired, I haven’t had a drink
I feel so tired, I’ll just lie on the floor
I feel so tired, like I’ve never felt before
I feel so tired, I may have lost the plot
I feel so tired, and feeling oh so fraught
I feel so tired, but cannot close my eyes
I feel so tired, I keep wanting to apologise
I feel so tired, I really shouldn’t complain
I feel so tired, it must be all the strain
I feel so tired, please don’t ask me why
I feel so tired, I’ll just lie here and die


Comments about I Feel So Tired by Gordon David

  • (8/6/2008 2:17:00 AM)

    too much stress, the whole being in great distress...Oh! my... just came from that...rest and sleep with a work of a pill a great help with my doctors ( hehehe) ...Nice piece, well penned... (Report)Reply

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  • Sadiqullah Khan (8/6/2008 1:14:00 AM)

    yes the tiredness, , , , sometimes one feels exactly that way, ,10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/5/2008 11:56:00 PM)

    Oh man I get that way too where I get so tired that I'll sleep anywhere as long as I'm not bothered. Excellent piece you continue to Impress me. Remember Spread yourself! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 5, 2008



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