I Found It All Poem by Sophia White

I Found It All



What I learned in vivid dreams
What I saw in gold sunbeams
What I felt in streaming rain
What I wove in daisy chains
What I read in starry skies
I found it all in your bright eyes.

What I read in written word
What I in flutes and cellos heard
What I saw writ in the seas
What I felt 'mid tow'ring trees
What I breathed in red sunrise
I found it all in your bright eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Landrey 08 September 2006

Excellent rhyme, very very good. But your meter was off and also you had an extra syllable hangin' out in the 'flute and cello' line, but really good choice of words. -landrey

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Jonzo Bandwagoner 07 September 2006

Caught up in the deep, dreamy feel-loved it!

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Preeti - is here! 27 August 2006

Sophia, this is lovely. The style of this poem is like poems in my mother tongue - hindi. Great work! Preets

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