Selena Star

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I Guess That Means 'No'-07 - Poem by Selena Star

As soon as we started getting closer
You broke up with me
I ask 'Do you miss me? '
But I get no reply
I guess that means 'No'

I can't fall out of love with you
It hurts more and more each day
I ask 'Do you still love me? '
But, again, i get no reply
I guess that means 'No'

Im loving you more and more each day
And i wait for you to take me back
I ask 'Do you want to be with me? '
Again, i get no reply
I guess that means 'No'

Im broken inside
And i want to die so it wont hurt as bad
I ask 'Would you care if i died? '
Wow, no reply
So i guess that means 'No' too...
GOODBYE


Comments about I Guess That Means 'No'-07 by Selena Star

  • (10/10/2007 12:43:00 PM)

    I love your poem! You can tell where it comes from. I always write poems like this one. On the thoughts i have at the time. It sucks to go through something that is so hard. Especially love! Keep on writing i love your poems they all remind me of ME! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/29/2007 9:49:00 PM)

    Very emotional and very well put together, Sometimes a 'no' could be a good thing in the long run, later on he will relize what a good thing he could of had. Trust me, from a guys point of view, We often think back on the women who have passed thru our lives, no matter the length of the stay, and ask ourselves the same question, 'What if I had of
    payed more attention to, , , , , , ?
    Often this is our loss, So just because someone says no, or nothing at all, is not the end of the world
    Loved the poem and as always girl, another big ten
    'Keep on inking the Pages'
    Poison
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  • (9/29/2007 3:09:00 PM)

    i like your poem its deep (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 29, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011


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